Thursday, March 30, 2017
Tuesday, March 28, 2017
School Camp 2017 vebs
We are reading to kill (violently) the prey in a game.
My group is walking to the river (freezing).
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Monday, March 27, 2017
My Maths Goals
My maths goals for 2017.
Term 1:
- put fractions into order from smallest to biggest.
- Round to the nearest whole number.
My maths goals for 2017
Term 3 :
- put fractions into order from smallest to biggest.
- Round to the nearest whole number. I can now round to the nearest whole number because i can do 3.49 is 3 and 27.82 is 28.
My maths goal for 2017
Term 4 :
- put fractions into order from smallest to biggest.
- How many 10's are in each number.
Thursday, March 16, 2017
The great war Maui
My goal for next time is to make it more existing.
The great battle of maui and the taniwha hinemoa.
Maui saw the taniwha coming so he punched the taniwha into the lava with his fish hook. Maui shouted in excitement hoora! . When he got back everyone thought he was a hero but what they did not know is that the Taniwha was still alive and the Taniwha came out of the volcano shouting YES I’M STILL ALIVE you will never beat me maui HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! so nice to have a warm bath once and awhile i hate cold bath’s.
The next day the lava blasted out of the volcano then hinemoa heard a voice so she followed it and then she ran up the volcano she got eaten by that really irritating taniwha and she burning in his mouth trying to escape before she could she burnt in the taniwha mouth a a a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h h h h! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! screamed hinemoa
When maui found out that hinemoa died he blamed it on the taniwha and he thought that the taniwha killed her so maui got ferrous maui turned into a giant hawk and flow up the volcano and found the taniwha on top of the volcano and he was confused he thought he killed the taniwha.
no now he was even more angry so he launched at the taniwha but the taniwha blocked the hit with maui’s magic fish Hook. So the taniwha got ferrous and hit maui which made maui go flying, he got back up and chopped the taniwha arm right off and then taniwha yelled at maui and again maui chopped his other arm off and kept battering that poor taniwha on the head,forehead and back so the taniwha simply gave up because knows it is the end for him maui killed the taniwha for good but is that true so just to make sure so maui gave up his life well at least that’s what he thought maui plunged after the taniwha grabbed him and fell into the lava maui cut that taniwha in half well it was in the lava. Maui however stayed alive and swam up to the surface and told everybody in the village about killing the taniwha for good and went to hinemoa’s funeral at the end he disappeared but he found out it was only the baby which made the mother taniwha ANGRY!!!!! I'M GONNA GET YOU MAUI AND I'M GONNA TAKE YOUR FISH HOOK AND BREAK IT. I gonna get YOU MAUI.
Maui got rid off the the taniwha by battering the taniwha on the head heap’s off times with his fish hook.
The end
Writing : Narrative Legends.
Writing Narrative Legends
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I need help to write a narrative legend.
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I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.
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I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events.
I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words and details to describe characters, settings and events. Using figurative language to help develop connection with the audience.
I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences to set the mood of my writing.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
I seek feedback on how to improve my writing.
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